The First Sin
The body was staged like a painting.
Raven Blaire stood just outside the crime scene tape, lips pressed into a hard line, eyes locked on the sculpture of flesh and symbolism posed on the marble floor. The victim—a male, mid-fifties, expensive suit cut open like a ribbon was draped over a bronze lion statue in the center of the penthouse atrium. His eyes had been sewn shut, a gold coin placed on each eyelid.
A banner of crimson paint smeared above the scene read:
“He feasted while others starved.”
A sin. Gluttony.
Raven stepped into the apartment as Detective Micah Duran waved her forward. “We’ve confirmed the ID. It belongs to Richard Vale. CEO of Vale Finance. Worth over three hundred million.”
She nodded. “How long’s he been dead?”
“ME estimates five hours. Security systems were disabled. Whoever did this was in and out without tripping a single alarm.”
Raven moved closer to the body. “No signs of struggle?”
“None. That’s the part that’s pissing me off.” Micah handed her a folder. “This was left under the body. Handwritten.”
She flipped it open.
“One down. Six to go.”
Her fingers tightened around the paper. Seven sins. Seven murders.
Another one of these.
She crouched, eyes sweeping over the details. The killer had positioned Vale with reverence, like a grotesque offering. Not just murder, this was a performance. A message.
“Why now?” she murmured.
Micah raised an eyebrow. “You mean why did you get dragged in?”
She didn’t answer. She knew why.
Because this had happened before.
“The victim's wife found the scene,” he said. “She’s being sedated downstairs.”
Raven stood, her pulse starting to pound. “Have we checked for any surveillance footage in the building? Elevator logs?”
Micah nodded. “Already pulled. No anomalies. It's like the bastard just… walked in.”
The wind outside howled against the glass, rattling the windowpanes. Raven’s gaze flicked to the skyline. Below, the city shimmered—beautiful, dangerous, oblivious.
She turned back to the scene. “This wasn’t random. The killer knew this man. Or what he stood for.”
Micah studied her face. “You think it’s personal?”
“No. Worse. Philosophical.”
She looked again at the coins on the eyes, the way the chest had been carved with surgical precision. No rage. No chaos. Just cold, clinical meaning.
And something else, a shadow forming in her gut.
She knew this signature.
It couldn’t be. That case had gone cold nearly twelve years ago.
The killer couldn’t be back.
Her voice came out low. “There was a murder like this years ago. Teenager. Posed with symbolic marks. We never caught the perp.”
Micah’s jaw clenched. “Raven…”
“Her name was Zara.” Raven’s twin.
Micah didn’t say anything for a long moment. “I thought you said that one was personal.”
“It was.” She looked at him. “That doesn’t mean it wasn’t also the first sin.”
Back at the precinct, Raven sat at her desk reviewing the autopsy report, but her mind kept flashing back to the scene. To the gold coins. To the letter.
She hadn’t heard from her psychiatrist in weeks. Her prescriptions were overdue. Maybe that was why her thoughts were fraying at the edges.
She reached into her bag, pulling out a worn folder. Inside: her old notes from Zara’s case. Hand-drawn sketches. Newspaper clippings. A photo of a girl with her face half-lit by sunlight, eyes bright and smiling.
Zara had been only sixteen.
The killer had posed for her too—draped across a bench in the school courtyard, her hands crossed over her chest like she was sleeping. The word “INNOCENCE” was painted in blood behind her.
The cops had called it ritualistic. Had no leads. The case fell apart within months.
But Raven hadn’t stopped hunting. Not even after she’d gone to Quantico. Not even after she’d been recruited by the Bureau. Her mind had never left that courtyard bench.
The ringing of her desk phone pulled her back.
She picked up. “Blaire.”
Micah’s voice came through. “Get dressed. We’ve got another one.”
The second scene was darker.
Literally. The body was found in an abandoned art gallery downtown. No lights. No heating. The entire place felt like a tomb.
This time, it was a woman. Early thirties. Fashion industry. Choked with a silk scarf, wrists bound with gold thread. Her hands were clasped in prayer, lips painted red, eyes wide open.
Raven bent down, shining her flashlight on the floor beneath the body.
Etched into the concrete was a single word:
“Lust.”
Micah stood behind her. “You see it, don’t you?”
She nodded. “It’s the same signature.”
“And this was under her heel.” He handed her a small, folded piece of paper.
Another message:
“Only those who burn are truly pure.”
Raven let out a breath. “This isn’t just a killer. This is a purge.”
Micah muttered a curse. “And it’s only the beginning.”
She stood and scanned the room. Her eyes stopped on something in the corner.
A camera. Disconnected. But not broken.
“Micah. Get tech down here. That camera might’ve recorded something before it was shut off.”
He nodded and stepped away to call it in.
Raven walked through the gallery, heart pounding. Every step echoed against the tile like a countdown.
She paused when her phone buzzed. Unknown number. One new message.
Her chest tightened.
“You're getting warmer.”
Attached was a photo. A girl walking alone. Raven.
Taken earlier today. At the first crime scene.
Someone was watching her.
She turned slowly.
And for the first time, she felt it.
She wasn’t just hunting him.
He was hunting her back.
The third murder came three days later.
And this time, Elijah Cross was there.
The scene was even more theatrical than the others. A man hanging upside down in his own office, wrists slit, blood pooling below in the shape of a serpent. A mirror placed before him read:
“Envy devours all.”
Police swarmed the place, but the second Raven stepped inside, her eyes found him.
Elijah.
She knew his face, of course. Everyone did. He was the youngest self-made billionaire in the country, built his cybersecurity empire from nothing, rumored to be part of every shadowy boardroom in the city.
But it wasn’t fame that made her freeze.
It was recognition.
Like she’d seen his eyes before. In another life. In another death.
He looked at her the same way.
“Raven Blaire,” he said. His voice was smooth, quiet. Dangerous.
“You know who I am?”
“I make it my business to know everyone who matters.”
She stepped forward. “And did the man who died here matter to you?”
He gave a half-smile. “Not really. But what he stood for did.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?”
Elijah glanced at the mirror, at the word “envy.” Then back at her. “People envy what they don’t understand. Power. Truth.”
Her instincts prickled. “Are you saying he deserved it?”
“I’m saying,” he replied calmly, “some sins are inevitable.”
Their eyes locked.
And in that moment, she knew:
He wasn’t afraid.
He wasn’t shocked.
He was intrigued.
And he was hiding something.
