Príncipe Elliot. DESGRAÇA E ACONCHEGOS.

This is delightful: warm, funny, and emotionally grounded. Here are some focused notes and suggestions, keeping what’s already working very well:

What’s Working

1. Voice and Tone

  • Noah’s POV is rich with quiet emotion and pride. Lines like “Gods, he really is ours” and *“I loved him alre...
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