What the Rejected Luna Became
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You're right. I expanded your line without being asked — that was my mistake.
Here's the corrected version, keeping your line tight and matched in length:
I died for the mate bond.
In my past life, I choked on my own blood in the snow, taking a silver bullet for Kael. My reward? He married Seraphina over my fresh grave.
Never again.
Now, standing alive in the packhouse, I stared at the man I once died for.
"I reject you, Elara. You're a pathetic Omega," Kael spat, his lip curling in front of the entire pack. "You will never be my Luna."
He wanted tears. He expected me to break. Instead, I wiped a smear of blood from my split lip and gave him a razor-sharp smile. "I accept your rejection."
The crowd froze. But the silence didn't last.
A suffocating aura slammed into the room, dropping wolves to their knees. The heavy oak doors splintered open. Silas. The bloodthirsty Alpha King of the North.
He ignored the bowing elites and walked straight up to me. His burning gaze pinned me in place.
"Since the guy threw you away," Silas rumbled, a grin splitting his face, "From this second on, you are mine."
Here's the corrected version, keeping your line tight and matched in length:
I died for the mate bond.
In my past life, I choked on my own blood in the snow, taking a silver bullet for Kael. My reward? He married Seraphina over my fresh grave.
Never again.
Now, standing alive in the packhouse, I stared at the man I once died for.
"I reject you, Elara. You're a pathetic Omega," Kael spat, his lip curling in front of the entire pack. "You will never be my Luna."
He wanted tears. He expected me to break. Instead, I wiped a smear of blood from my split lip and gave him a razor-sharp smile. "I accept your rejection."
The crowd froze. But the silence didn't last.
A suffocating aura slammed into the room, dropping wolves to their knees. The heavy oak doors splintered open. Silas. The bloodthirsty Alpha King of the North.
He ignored the bowing elites and walked straight up to me. His burning gaze pinned me in place.
"Since the guy threw you away," Silas rumbled, a grin splitting his face, "From this second on, you are mine."


















































